manish110203
Hey. I was just reading your story Married to him. I have a suggestion. The story is good the plot is good. But dont you think that the story needs his pov too? You know only Arshita's pov is making the story go flat. I will suggest you some stories if you want to get the idea. Just an opinion. Sorry if i have offended you.
manish110203
@manish110203 I have read "Heartless billionaire" and "Billionaire's desire" and I liked them thats why I wanted to know Armaan's pov as well.
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apricotlove
@manish110203 Hi dear. Thank you so much for your suggestion, and I am not, even an ounce, offended by it. It's nice to know what my readers would love as It's really hard to come by. But the story has already finished and I hope I have done that. Let me tell you though that the idea of only Arshita's POV was to instill secrecy in Armaan's character and let my readers and authors decide what he was really like. My many other stories like "Heartless Billionaire", "Billionaire's Desire," and "Just One Night" have both protogonists povs. Hope you like them if you give them a shot. Love u❤
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