Rathan brothers
Time line: Vamshi reminding about Amrutha.
Ved freezes in his spot seeing Amrutha with her parents. Amrutha is still in her wedding dress, her eyes were completely numb, no emotions.
She came back to her consciousness when she heard slap sound on young boy, her father slapped wrong person, slap should be earned by Ved.
"Yeh aap kya kar rahe hai?" Veebha pushed Amrutha's father harshly.
"Apko nahi patha isne kya kiya?" Amrutha's father asked, who is blazing in anger.
"Ji nahi patha, isiliye thho pucha, kya meh apko pagal jyse dikh ahi hu, kuch bhi" Veebha asked bitting her lips who is controlling to smile.
"Koi aapse seekhe, valcano ka jwala ko ice laga dhe" Vamshi muttered. Ved who was standing near heard it.
Veebha just threwed Vamshi, as if he was potato sack, he landed directly on sofa.
"Uska jagah vo yeh, abh bathaye, koun yeh apka damadh" Veebha asked authoritive, everyone in the room who were present got shivers.
"Yeh family matter hai, apko beech meh na ayhe tho hi acha ye" Vansh said in calm voice, his aggiation was clearly seen in calm voice.
"Yeh family matter hotha tabh takh, agar iss admi neh mera beta ko taphad na mara hotha" Veebha raised her voice,
Whole room stilled for a moment.
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Timeline: Akshara returned from Hassan. After two days, Ved and Amrutha's marriage was fixed.
In a room, utensils, spoons, plates, vegetables,fridge,fruits were organised neatly.
On stove, black colour kadai which was honoured by oil, spieces, gas flame was working it's magic.
Aroma was invitation to the people who are occupied in the home, to satisy their stomach, give blessings.
"Akshara , namak dal is benghan ki bartha meh" Akshara's mother told her as she moved towards mixer to grind spices.
Akshara took salt from shelf and was about to pour more quantity than requiered.
"Mandhbudhi, mene namak dalne ko bola hai bartha meh, washing powder nahi jo balti meh dal rahe ho" Akshara's mother said.
Akshu pouted, "aapne tho measurement bhi nahi bathaya".
"Bartha se kapde silva rahe ho, jo measurement ki padi yeh" Akshu's mother asked switching off mixer.
"Arey, measurement nahi bathyenge tho kya bolthe yeh" Akshu was genuinely confused.
"Taste ke anusar dalthe hai, theri saas ke samne ese hi bolegi kya" Akshu's mother took salt from her tought her how much quantity should be added.
"Baad meh jaye saas, meh koi kaam vaam nahi karnevali hu" Akshu clearly dismissd.
"Mera naam katwayegi kya" Her mother cupped her mouth.
"Kyu humesha maa par ungli uthti hai, Pitha Pe kyu nahi" Akshu was fed up with discrimination.
"Kya bathe ho rahi yeh, maa beti ke beech." Akshara's father asked.
Akshu shooked her head in no, but her mother had other plans.
"Aapki warrior puch rahi yeh, ki maa pe hi kyu ungli uthti hai, pitha pe nahi" Akshu's mother said to her husband.
She had evil glint in her eyes.
Akshu's father looked here and there beafore answering.
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In Rathan's mansion.
Situation was going out of control, Veebha needed answer from Amrutha's father, Vamshi was trying hard to calm his mother.
Vansh was trying to put some sense to Veebha.
Anjali was dealing with Amrutha's mother, who got into fight intentionally.
Ved came infront of Amrutha and moved away from there, when Ved was sure he was out of ear. Ved dangerously pulled her towards him, a gasp entered from her mouth, her dazzle eyes met fierce eyes which could burn into ashes.
Vicky was sitting cooly with pop corn and maza.
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I am not shamed to show disappointment towards the response I get.
Do you people even know why I took time, reason is simple I lost enthasusim, felt like to drop the book.
I know there are some they are not reading, they are just voting.
I am sorry I forced myself not to think readers Pov.
As the chapter increases , votes are decreasing.
Is the way of writing is high fi standard.
Comment guys.
One thing I can gaurrentee you , I will not drop out but there may be delay.
I have fixed certain day to windup this book, you know there is hardly 10 chapters.
Or
Do you want me to complete the book and make you people to wait for second book to publish.
Choice is yours, either delay for chapters or wait for second book.
Clarification: I said votes are optional not comments, don't force me to keep target for comments.
Rember if I keep also.
I won't accept one or two veivwers comments which are more than 10 comments. If they comment more too I am happy but it doesn't come in count session.
It will be like I forced them.
I need other veiwers to comment,
My replies are not counted.
I have respect to the regular commentors, silent readers, regular readers but not to them those who just vote but doesn't read.
They vote for us in the purpose of we get motivated. I am sorry to say I don't know about others, personally I won't get motivated. So STOP that.
No FORCE! For anything, do it with your will. That will show my place.
By knowing my place I can improve.
§Shiv Hari§
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Fanfiction"You are my responsibility, your will or not will you are stuck here."The Eldest son Vansh Rathan shouted in aghast. In return he got silence. "You cannot be our brother, you may exist in the house but you will not exist for me" The second son Ved...
